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I've seen you in my dreams before,
just an image nothing more.
And every morning when I wake
it is for you that my heart aches.
Your long black hair like raven's wing,
I can't imagine a more beautiful thing.
Glowing emeralds are your eyes,
they are a girl's love-struck demise.
How I know you I do not know,
but wherever you are I shall go.
This I promise unto thee-
by Earth and Fire,
Wind and Sea,
This is my will,
so mote it be.
I tried my best to edit a base to look like the man in my dreams. And I know the end of this may sound like some sort of spell, but it's not. I just finished reading the second Secret Circle book and it just kind of fit if that makes sense.

Original Base (for image): [link]

Base made by: :iconmiisakiii:

Before I did have a different image for this poem that was made by someone else, here's the info for that image:

Image creator: Kaelie_2007 on photobucket
Image link: [link]
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Neon-WarMachine Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
What happened did the image change?
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:iconkirauchiha666:
KiraUchiha666 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, I changed it now that I made my own picture
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Neon-WarMachine Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Any way to Put the old one up with a diffrent name?
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:iconkirauchiha666:
KiraUchiha666 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
no, i can't
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:iconkittykakes1997:
kittykakes1997 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
omg this looks like my boyfriend O_O awesome no words other than them <=
:)
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:iconkirauchiha666:
KiraUchiha666 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
lol nice XD
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:iconkittykakes1997:
kittykakes1997 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
hahahahahah XD
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:iconlivelovelifeeleni:
LivelovelifeEleni Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Student General Artist
mfffffffffffffff

MGFFFFFF

OH IF MATT WAS HERE HE WOULD BE JEALOUS OF ALL MY FEEL FOR TERU
THANK YOU SO MUCH WOOHOOO DEATHNOTE!
<3 MADE MY DAY and wonderful words <3 /w/wegfdbg
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:iconkirauchiha666:
KiraUchiha666 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
lol you're welcome and thanks XD
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:iconalmesiva-moonshadow:
Almesiva-Moonshadow Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Looks like Mikami Teru from Death Note! :love:
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:iconkirauchiha666:
KiraUchiha666 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
yup
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:iconnayruslove16:
NayrusLove16 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
It is Teru Mikami from Death Note
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:iconbestunearthywolfever:
bestunearthywolfever Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hes cute :3
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:iconkirauchiha666:
KiraUchiha666 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
mhm
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bestunearthywolfever Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I want a man with long hair and amber eyes and is sweet and fun as can be.
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:iconkirauchiha666:
KiraUchiha666 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Sounds like a perfect guy to me
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:iconbestunearthywolfever:
bestunearthywolfever Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yup! :)
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:iconcountchristoph:
CountChristoph Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012   Writer
Did you get Permission before using this Image?
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:iconkirauchiha666:
KiraUchiha666 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
no i didn't, but that's why I put the information for the link and who made it in the description, I had asked the maker before if I could use it and she never answered me, I told her that if she decided that she didn't like it being up on here tell me and I'll take it down.
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CountChristoph Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012   Writer
I would advise not using it then; not saying "no" does not mean "yes".
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:iconkirauchiha666:
KiraUchiha666 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
better now?
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:iconcountchristoph:
CountChristoph Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012   Writer
If it were free to use, then yes.
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:iconkirauchiha666:
KiraUchiha666 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
it was
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tempy666 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
Nicely written, good verses, good combination of words and rhyme.
I like the poem it projects your desire for the mystery man beautifully, the emotions of longing and desire are strongly represented when you describe the features you are strongly attracted to. But there is a undercurrent of haunting and slight doubt in the last few verses. I got a strong impression that you are haunted by his image and that you fear you'll only be with him in your dreams.

I could be wrong, this is just my interpretation of your poem which I liked a lot, and it reminds me of my poetry :)
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KiraUchiha666 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks, I did my best to convey my feelings when I wrote this. Honestly I was surprised with myself for writing that well.. I'm always writing poetry, but I can't always get things phrased quite the way I want. And you're interpretation was correct. So far I think you're one of the only people that have been able to draw all of that from it. :) I'm really glad you liked it. I'll have to check out some of your poems! :)
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tempy666 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
They are on fiction press under the collection of morbid poetry ([link])I am planing on posting them here as well :)
Other then that if you need a "beta" or just someone to bounce ideas off I'm here for you I've been writing poetry since I was 16 and I'm 26 now so 10 years of ups and downs and lots of experience that I'm willing and ready to share.
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KiraUchiha666 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Alright, thanks!
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makorrafan453 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
SO FLIPPING AWESOME;-;
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KiraUchiha666 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
lol thanks :)
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makorrafan453 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Your welcome:)
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CreAtor135698 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Professional Filmographer
lol this guy looks like he's from KH
nice poem btw
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:iconkirauchiha666:
KiraUchiha666 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks :)
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NiroLatsuy Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
i loved that pic! and the poem is great , it could be a song!! i really loved it
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KiraUchiha666 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks, I'd love to try to make a song out of the poem, but I always have trouble with making them.. I'm glad you liked it though! :D
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NiroLatsuy Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
youre welcome :) , u know is not hard , if u already have the lyrics u just have to put a beat on it and then u have a song , if u know how to pplay any instrument u can do it :)
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KiraUchiha666 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Good point.. I've been practicing the guitar... actually I think I'll give it a shot :)
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:iconnirolatsuy:
NiroLatsuy Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
great! if u can turn it to a song plz let me know , send me the acords then i can play hahaha :)
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KiraUchiha666 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha will do! :)
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NiroLatsuy Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
great :) cant wait!!!
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:iconhiyor:
hiyor Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ah I see still nice poem ^ ^
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KiraUchiha666 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks :)
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:iconhiyor:
hiyor Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yep :heart:
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towimihura Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
love the drawing and the poem too, congrats on your work
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:iconkirauchiha666:
KiraUchiha666 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks :)
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:iconiotaku96:
iotaku96 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I know, right?! This is so beautiful i could cry! I totally agree on the poem!
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KiraUchiha666 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:aww: :huggle:
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Beautiful-Sweetheart Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
:aww: BEAUTIFUL :aww:
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KiraUchiha666 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! :tighthug:
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Beautiful-Sweetheart Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
Your Welcome :)
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